| 2013年高考英语作文题目（山东）： 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回邮件： 1. 未及时回复的原因; 2. 你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。 注意： 1. 次数：120~150; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【试题点评】 今年的书面表达题目延续山东省一贯的提纲作文命题习惯，时隔一年之后重新回到“书信题”的大框架中，考了一篇“以道歉信为外衣，以活动安排为主体段”的提纲作文，相当于10年山东卷(道歉信)和07年四川卷(假期安排)和合体。这种作文是我们平时经常练习的，因此套路很完善、套话很丰富。此外，本文中需要同学们翻译的难句不多，因此，只要在备考过程中有意识地了解过高考英语作文的提分方法，掌握了常用的亮点词汇、加分句型和过渡词，并加以针对性训练，这道题目应该不难写。 【经典套路】 第一段：问候+写信背景+写信目的 第二段：“道歉”部分(相当于“写信背景”) 第三段：“假期安排”部分 第四段：补充说明+客套话 【高分范文】 Dear Tom, How are you doing? (问候) You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation.(写信背景) I am sorry that I didn’t reply without delay.(写信目的) How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it. However, I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for me. As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study. I believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice.(第二段为道歉信常见套路) By the way, I have a busy schedule for my summer vacation.(主题句) First and foremost, I would do a part time job, so that my interpersonal skills would be improved.(拓展句1) Additionally, I will take a short trip to Beijing to take a summer course in the New Oriental School.(拓展句2) Last but not least, maybe I will work as a volunteer for the school as a teaching assistant.(拓展句3) These are my plan for the summer vacation. What’s yours? I am looking forward to your earliest reply.(以合理的客套话结尾) Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua Tags：2013年,高考,英语,满分,作文  |
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