2013年高考英语满分作文（上海卷）

    II. Guided Writing

　　Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.

　　上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所(博物馆还是社区图书馆)征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求：

　　1. 简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择;

　　2. 说明你的理由(从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比)

　　【点评解析】

　　今年英语作文话题贴近生活，考生应该有话可说，但要写好，不仅要有一定的语言功底，还需要对博物馆和社区图书馆有所了解，否则话语会比较表面化。这样的命题对英语教学有较好的导向作用，即学校和家庭要努力提供机会让孩子走出课堂，走向社会。

　　如何写&整体框架:

　　考生认真审题后，作文时开章明义，用一句主题句明确自己的选择(如选择社区图书馆或博物馆)，然后另起两段分别就便利性和专业性进行比较，笔墨应重点放在你所选择的地点的优势方面，结尾部分稍作总结，呼应开头的选择。

　　【范文】

Dear Sir/ Madam,

　　I’ve just learned that Shanghai Museum will hold a famous painting exhibition and you’re responsible for collecting public suggestions about the best location to hold it. I’m writing this letter to share with you my opinions. As far as I’m concerned, it is more reasonable to hold thepainting exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries. My reasons are as follows.

　　On the one hand, it is more convenient for people to reach Shanghai Museum, located in the center of the city. Visitors can go there by subway,by bus and so on. What’s more, Shanghai Museum is much more extensive than community libraries, providing visitors with a more comfortable environmentto appreciate the famous paintings.

　　On the other hand, Shanghai Museum, a well-known and distinguished museum both at home and abroad, is more professional in holding paintingexhibitions. What’s of great significance is that not only does it provide advanced facilities and high-tech monitors but also offers professional security guards to protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen in the process of exhibition.

　　Consequently, I strongly propose that the painting exhibition is to be held in the Shanghai Museum.

　　Yours,

　　Wang Min