五、留言条 假设你是李华,星期天你要和你的同班同学李明一起去敬老院参加义务劳动,你去找他,但他没有在家 ,你给他留言说明要求,内容如下: (1)9:30在学校门口集合; (2)带劳动工具(洗衣粉、理发工具、除草工具等); (3)自带午饭,骑自行车前往。 注意: (1)词数100左右;(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Li Ming, ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 【猜题理由】2010年高考写作题应该是学生较为熟悉的、身边的与他们生活、学习密切相关的话题。因为高考有一定的连续性,2010年有些省份仍可能采用应用文进行考查。 【构思点拨】本题属于提纲式要点作文,要求学生就所给内容写一张留言条,是学生比较熟悉的题材,体现了英语学习应 该注意实用性,生活化的原则。应注意下面几点: (1)注意人称,应该用第一人称的形式给同学李明(第二人称)写便条:(2)注意时态的正确使用:从试题的内容上可以看出在表达要点上应用将来时;(3) 注意恰当使用逻辑词语,是各个要点间逻辑连贯,行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译,而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句,因此要仔细 组织语言,合理安排结构。在语言方面,要特别注意简洁明了,开门见山。 【参考范文】 Dear Li Ming, This Sunday we'll go to the nursing home and do some voluntary labor. You were out, when I dropped in on you. Therefore, I had to leave a message to you. According to what monitor said, we'll meet at the gate of our school at 9:30 tomorrow morning and start out together by bike. So you should take your bike and don't forget to take some washing powder, barber tools and weeding tools so that we can help them with washing clothes, cutting their hair and get rid of some weed in the garden. At last, you should remember to take some food for lunch because we'll stay there for chatting with them at noon. If you come back, you'll phone me at once. Li Hua 六、记叙文 假如你是武汉大学附中高三(1)的李华,今年即将高中毕业。请根据以下要点给某英文报写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对高三生活的看法。 (1)对获得的帮助表示感谢; (2)消除与同学之间的误会; (3)努力学习,实现人生梦想; (4)对学弟、学妹的建议。 注意: (1)可适当加入细节,以使行文连贯; (2)词数:100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数) 。 High school is regarded as the best time in a person's life. As a senior 3 student, it won't take long before I graduate. _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 【猜题理由】本篇书面表达能比较真实地反映学生的生活实际,话题内容关注学生的社交生活和树立健康的人生观,具有考查的现实意义和指导意义;在 语言表达上,能够让学生充分运用所学知识,毫无词汇障碍地表达自己的思想;此外,在语言表达的设置上也有一定的伸展性,能有效地激发学生个性观点的创建。 【构思点拨】本篇书面表达是常见的提纲类型的写作,要点明确清楚,便于学生组织文章,理清脉络。行文时要注意处理好语言表达的控制性和伸展性之间的关系。 【参考范文】 High school is regarded as the best time in a person's life. As a senior three student, it won't take long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students. Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, it's high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Above all, I've made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, "no pains, no gains." Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men. Tags:预测,2014年,高考,英语,作文 |
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